the cold equations
Jun. 25th, 2004 12:11 amI had previously been under the impression that one of the pivotal characters was a child (of perhaps nine or ten), not an eighteen-year-old. I found that this affected my enjoyment of the story; the character makes a mistake with consequences (not following directions, in a really big way), and when I thought those mistakes were being made by a child I had more sympathy. As it is, it's hard for me to really appreciate this character's angst. The story is also somewhat a product of its time (the 50s); the other main character makes a point of saying he would have handled things differently if it had been a "man". (Aside: she's a "girl".) It's still a good story, but I liked it better with my mistaken impressions. :-)
There was a Twilight Zone episode based on the story (the series from about a decade ago, which I mostly missed due to not having the right cable channels available). I'd kind of like to see that.
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Date: 2004-06-25 01:48 pm (UTC)Sure, but the question of what to do when you've already done all that makes a more interesting story, so I'm willing to grant that the pad of paper, case containing the medicine vials, chair, tools, and clothing don't add up to enough. I think the conceit of this story is that the only way to solve the problem is going to be unpleasant for someone.