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Dec. 11th, 2005 04:08 pm
cellio: (out-of-mind)
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What's wrong with this advertisement?


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Date: 2005-12-11 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ralphmelton.livejournal.com
The more I look, the more bugged I am.
- I first saw the word "jingles" where I would have expected "Jingle".
- No time signature.
- The repeat-bar at the end of each line would produce a "Jingle Bells" even more repetitious than usual.
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