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Dec. 11th, 2005 04:08 pm
cellio: (out-of-mind)
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What's wrong with this advertisement?


I'll screen comments now and unscreen in a day or so.

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Date: 2005-12-11 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mortuus.livejournal.com
Well, the second line of the song should be "jingle" rather than "jingles." Also, both lines of music have the repeat symbol, and that's not how the song goes. Finally, "decked-out" shouldn't be hyphenated.

Sad. The dollar off is a pretty good coupon, though :-)

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