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Dec. 11th, 2005 04:08 pm
cellio: (out-of-mind)
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What's wrong with this advertisement?


I'll screen comments now and unscreen in a day or so.

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Date: 2005-12-11 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jeannegrrl.livejournal.com
I see three things right away:

1) there's a repeat after the first line - that would have you singing Jingle Bells 4x before getting to Jingle All the Way. Which leads me to

2) I'm pretty sure the second line is supposed to be "Jingle" and not "Jingles" all the way. And finally

3) There's a repeat after "Jingles all the way!" which again makes the song not play out right.

As written, it's
Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells,
Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells,
Jingles all the way!
Jingles all the way!

Of course now that I look closer at the ad, I see that "Jingles all the way" refers to "Nestle Jingles," so I can let that one slide. But the repeats, just wrong.

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