a little more Hebrew practice

[cellio]

I wonder if I got my verb senses right...

Comments

[magid.livejournal.com]

Your mems are mirror reversed again.

I'd say "v'hu amar" (I'd also say "ani dibarti"). What's Melton? I think there should be "et" after "ohevet", and "shana" should be "hashanah" to match "hazot". I think "elmade" should be "elamed".

[gnomi.livejournal.com]

I'd have said "lilmod b'Melton" instead of "latet Melton." "Tachat," while correct in "tachat Ivrit," is more Biblical Hebrew than Modern, to my ear, and I would've said "bimkom."

(also, your zayin is backwards.)